Wednesday, 30 March 2016

Camp writing

In class we had to wright about school camp. My story is about a horror story but it's true if you want to read more look below.





https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vQiam08dRgMbVQEmjHEjKIMc7tbDQYNxLY1VoZzy4A/pub?embedded=true

Thursday, 17 March 2016

My whakapapa

OIn etereo we are doing our whakapapa. Etereo means Elly Troy ereo witch we do every Monday after lunch. We have been learning all Moirai names for our family here is all of them.

This is my fathers side.

This is my mothers side.


Evaluation: I think I'm doing good at speaking tearo.

Sunday, 13 March 2016

2016 School Camp Portfolio Post

On Tuesday we went on school camp to El Rancho. When we got there we had morning tea. Then we spit up into 2 groups. One group went to the pool the other group went to the slip' n slide. Then we had lunch. Every night we spit in to our activity groups and did skit practice. Every night before bed we did our camp diaries. We did ten activities pool, low ropes, rifles, archery, mini golf, water side, horses, kayaks, rafts and team initiative we did them all. My favourite activity was the rifles because it was my first time doing air rifles. The first night it was hard to sleep. On Friday we drove to Levin and had lunch then we played at adventure park. Then we drove to russell street school.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vQiam08dRgMbVQEmjHEjKIMc7tbDQYNxLY1VoZzy4A/edit?usp=docslist_api





Feedback I think you did well on your handwriting so people could read it.
Feedforward Next time you could fix your spelling mistakes and some of the sentences didn't make sense.

Thursday, 3 March 2016

My one word 2016

My one word is sportsmanship because I love sports any sports. The teacher  found this thing called my one word. Elly took our photo. We had to hold our hands up like we where holding a sigh. We had to do 2 drafts to practice our word art. Then we did it on a good copy. Then we glued it on.

Evaluation: I think I did good at fitting sportsmanship into the peace of paper.
Feedback: I like your creativity.
Feedforward: Next time you could not just have the same on most of the letters.