Thursday, 1 September 2016

Writing portfolio post

In class we watched a video about how to make a tennis ball. We weren't allowed to say anything about making it. We wrote some words down about what you see and what they look like. I saw some things that look like caps. So I did a soda story with Edward. This is my story.


Link for the tennis ball making
http://thekidshouldseethis.com/post/how-to-make-a-tennis-ball


Feedback/Feedforward: you did nice next time can you speak a little more
Evaluation: It was hard to write this story but next time I could do it in docs.

1 comment:

  1. Cool story Angus, you had me hooked from the start and then .... it just ended? Next time try and add a cool twist or something to wrap up your story.

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